I'd rather see a smile than a frown And I'd rather be a naught than renown I like my yolks runny And I like my jokes funny And I like insurrections put down
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I'd rather see a smile than a frown And I'd rather be a naught than renown I like my yolks runny And I like my jokes funny And I like insurrections put down
I like the honest simplicity, rhyme scheme and additional gravity leant by the final line.
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Thanks, I think of limericks as being more engineered than written. It’s a fun constraint to play with and you can goof around and make jokes or be serious, either way.
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Didn’t expect that last but I concur!
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Thanks V.J. – those of us with functioning brains can easily come together on this point.
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True! Welcome.
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